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Cursed winds keep blowing
to warn me about your arrivals
Your ruthless strikes I shall always avoid
Admit you can't send me back to the void!

What's that alternate dimension
full of nothing, whose invention?
Instead of just locked up in a cell,
I was stuck in a quiet version of hell

You were positive I'd never flee,
but my people feel in debt with me
Some of'em got their magic right,
thus once again I see daylight

Cursed winds keep blowing
to warn me about your arrivals
Your ruthless strikes I shall always avoid
Admit you can't send me back to the void!

Your army of beasts sweeps this land,
inglorious task that has no end
Most enjoyable cat-and-mouse
It's pretty easy to outsmart brute force

How much more time and gold do you wish
to waste with a goal you can't achieve?
When will you accept the fact that I
am much cleverer than you want to believe?

Cursed winds keep blowing
to warn me about your arrivals
Your ruthless strikes I shall always avoid
Admit you can't send me back to the void!
A simple piece with a magical and even RPG-y (but not necessarily medieval) vibe.

This is a sillier one, so I decided to put little pressure rhyme-wise. Not to say there are few rhymes, though; just not complicated ones, only AABB-ish schemes.

Despite the repeated stanza looking like a chorus, this is not a song. It was going to be one, and I figured I'd leave the repetitions, after all, in case you haven't noticed, the other stanzas develop from that main one.
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Stingley Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
This one gets bonus thumbs-ups because of the fantasy feeling thrown in it. Who doesn't love alternate dimensions? I know I do! <3
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LucasCAPS Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012   Writer
This is something dA in general does all the freaking time, but I myself never do this magical thingy. It felt highly weird, but that's why I wanted to do it, I have to keep bursting my bubble.
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